My first track- give me some reviews
http://soundcloud.com/willmill/harpsnthings
This is my first track Ive made and saved on my iPod so far....I got a few more ideas so I will post some more stuff up soon, until then lemme get some criticism and advice, I feel like its missing something big <!-- s:D --><img src="{SMILIES_PATH}/icon_e_biggrin.gif" alt=":D" title="Very Happy" /><!-- s:D -->
This is my first track Ive made and saved on my iPod so far....I got a few more ideas so I will post some more stuff up soon, until then lemme get some criticism and advice, I feel like its missing something big <!-- s:D --><img src="{SMILIES_PATH}/icon_e_biggrin.gif" alt=":D" title="Very Happy" /><!-- s:D -->
Comments
It does need more though - a swirling pad and once the first vocal part kicks in, dont just repeat the loop, progress it - more speech perhaps?