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Just a little criticism..... The beat is okay, but it's just that; a beat. This is a good start, but you need a melody and/or a hook. Try working on making a full track versus just an intro.
Intro: 4bars
Verse: 8 or 16 bars
Chorus: 8 Bars
Bridge/hook 2 bars
Outtro: 4 or 8 bars
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Intro: 4bars
Verse: 8 or 16 bars
Chorus: 8 Bars
Bridge/hook 2 bars
Outtro: 4 or 8 bars
1 bar = 4 beats if you're working with 4/4 timing