Nice and crisp, good bass line. The fades are a little too much I think -- try dropping some sounds out but not others, it might maintain the vibe a little better. The scratching sounds great and jives perfectly, but the tune as a whole could use a better build. Some more variation in the drums could probably help you achieve that. For a 1 minute and change song, I'd give it a 6/10
Dylan3
This one sounds much more full and the silence in between the guitar samples adds some nice flavour. You might be overdoing it a little bit though. No other complaints, nice vibe straight through. Could definitely use a little more variance in general, but as you polish the tracks that will come anyways. Good job <!-- s:) --><img src="{SMILIES_PATH}/icon_e_smile.gif" alt=":)" title="Smile" /><!-- s:) --> 7/10
Bells2
My honest advice would be to replace the initial string with a different instrument (I'd recommend a piano), nice melodies in general though! The drums are awesome in the one, very nice panning work, it's much more immersive. Different beats add a build to the song as well, I'd guess you spent a little more time on this one. 7.5.
Clav1
This is a good song, but it needs a bit of spicing up I think, it just sounds a little plain to me. Nothing wrong with it though, for what it is it's good. Maybe it's just not my style. The production is good though, so good work. 6.5/10.
New2
Some nice subtle work here, I enjoy this one on a personal level. It has some nice ear candy and subtle variations in a simple beat make it complex enough to not get bored of but still easy to follow. Great panning work on the hats too. 8/10
I stopped there because it looks like you've had enough listeners on the following tracks to get a good idea of where you're at. It's good work overall dude but I think you need to just take 1 or 2 tracks and work on them until your eyes bleed. They've all got potential.
Listening to the tracks below, they sound much more polished. Loving Twilight and ESPECIALLY Sitar (love love love). Bring a couple of your new tracks up to this level.
Comments
Nice and crisp, good bass line. The fades are a little too much I think -- try dropping some sounds out but not others, it might maintain the vibe a little better. The scratching sounds great and jives perfectly, but the tune as a whole could use a better build. Some more variation in the drums could probably help you achieve that. For a 1 minute and change song, I'd give it a 6/10
Dylan3
This one sounds much more full and the silence in between the guitar samples adds some nice flavour. You might be overdoing it a little bit though. No other complaints, nice vibe straight through. Could definitely use a little more variance in general, but as you polish the tracks that will come anyways. Good job <!-- s:) --><img src="{SMILIES_PATH}/icon_e_smile.gif" alt=":)" title="Smile" /><!-- s:) --> 7/10
Bells2
My honest advice would be to replace the initial string with a different instrument (I'd recommend a piano), nice melodies in general though! The drums are awesome in the one, very nice panning work, it's much more immersive. Different beats add a build to the song as well, I'd guess you spent a little more time on this one. 7.5.
Clav1
This is a good song, but it needs a bit of spicing up I think, it just sounds a little plain to me. Nothing wrong with it though, for what it is it's good. Maybe it's just not my style. The production is good though, so good work. 6.5/10.
New2
Some nice subtle work here, I enjoy this one on a personal level. It has some nice ear candy and subtle variations in a simple beat make it complex enough to not get bored of but still easy to follow. Great panning work on the hats too. 8/10
I stopped there because it looks like you've had enough listeners on the following tracks to get a good idea of where you're at. It's good work overall dude but I think you need to just take 1 or 2 tracks and work on them until your eyes bleed. They've all got potential.
Listening to the tracks below, they sound much more polished. Loving Twilight and ESPECIALLY Sitar (love love love). Bring a couple of your new tracks up to this level.
Hope that helps.