Zsnake - Nightmare (Hip_Hop)

ZSnake

Hey I'm new to beat making and i want some tips on what i can improve on so here is my first beat ever made by me <!-- s:) --><img src="{SMILIES_PATH}/icon_e_smile.gif" alt=":)" title="Smile" /><!-- s:) -->

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Made it on Intua BeatMaker. I'm making more but i need some criticism on this cause i fell that i can do better but for the kit i used and some other samples this is the best i could come up with for now.

ZSnake

Updated my page:

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JohnnyB

I might say, ok for a first try but I cannot, it's wack, you'd rather listen to some 90s stuff and try coming up with some drum patterns then you can start modernizing them then you add sounds...

ZSnake

Yea i know i rushed it but i did the best i can with what i had so it is what it is basically.. funny thing is i got good chart ratings for it on soundclick for it being my first beat ever and not knowing nothing about making beats... Didn't you hear the third 16 bars? if thats not a good drum pattern i don't know what is... should of just looped the whole song with that and made it generic <!-- s:D --><img src="{SMILIES_PATH}/icon_e_biggrin.gif" alt=":D" title="Very Happy" /><!-- s:D -->