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Another fresh one, Relapse by Broken Scythe

xSCYTHExxSCYTHEx
edited July 2010 in BeatMakers Showcase
Whatsup everyone. I finally got Relapse onto my comp. Took a whole night(I slept through the process haha)
Relapse is the first song in my artist page. The music player is towards the bottom.
I was improvising on a keyboard and inspiration struck me out of nowhere as usual. I made the piano melody and just built around it with a synth from nLog and a choir from the keyboard. The focus for me was specifically the drums, which I'd hope are really on point. I added a lot of touches rhythmically, and I'm pretty proud of it. feels like a step forward skill wise.
I hope you enjoy, give some feedback please fam. I really want to better myself but i can't without some criticism(beside that of my friends and family)
I return it.

Comments

  • SkepsisSkepsis
    edited 5:15AM
    Hey Scythe,

    Nice beat. Pretty relaxed. Not that I'm one to talk much because I don't really use voices/multisamples in my beats but the piano riff sounded a little off. I understand you were improvising which is sick cause I can't so ish with keys but maybe a small amount of quantization or playing with a met always helps me. Keep on groovin, Stay up.

    One,

    Skepsis
  • xSCYTHExxSCYTHEx
    edited 5:15AM
    thanks man, and yeah the piano is a little off, but I was doing takes and realized I wanted a bit of a more naturalistic feel, so I just chose this one to be the cut because it had a genuine sound to it.
    thanks for the feed, I returned it <!-- s:) --><img src="{SMILIES_PATH}/icon_e_smile.gif" alt=":)" title="Smile" /><!-- s:) -->
  • ZSnakeZSnake
    edited 5:15AM
    The beginning sounds really good. I was really digging the drums from the start and as well as the melody, you improved as well. Everything to me matches perfectly. Couldn't have done it any better. Good job. Best BM in here recently so far.
  • ZSnakeZSnake
    edited 5:15AM
    "ZSnake&quot wrote:
    The beginning sounds really good. I was really digging the drums from the start and as well as the melody, you improved as well. Everything to me matches perfectly. Couldn't have done it any better. Good job. Best BM in here recently so far.

    PS. How did you get the music player on Facebook. Looks cool, Haha.
  • xSCYTHExxSCYTHEx
    edited 5:15AM
    Lol Z bro, now it seems your just saying tht haha. But ill take your word for it man, thanks.
    I appreciate the look Z, keep up the grind. We'll get to pro soon enough, we just keep at it.
    O and its an application on FB called Music Player. Just make a band page and you can access it by searching music player in FB. Its the one that looks like it was designed by FB itself.
  • xSCYTHExxSCYTHEx
    edited 5:15AM
    Lol Z bro, now it seems your just saying tht haha. But ill take your word for it man, thanks.
    I appreciate the look Z, keep up the grind. We'll get to pro soon enough, we just keep at it.
    O and its an application on FB called Music Player. Just make a band page and you can access it by searching music player in FB. Its the one that looks like it was designed by FB itself.
  • ZSnakeZSnake
    edited 5:15AM
    Naw, I'm being Honest. To me the production was all out good. If it was ok i would of said that but it's not, It's great to say the least and I'm digging it. You really seem to have a very unique ear for good melody's which is always gonna be a given the Pro Ranks. For what it is it's very good, There's so much unique styles that you really can't smash them all together and i fell that the style on this track is very well put out. Thanks also for the help. Peace bro.
  • xSCYTHExxSCYTHEx
    edited 5:15AM
    Damn, wrll thanks Z. That really means alot coming from you bro.
    Anytime man, you know i got you.
    Also, you should use youtube for more exposure as well. Its worth a shot.
  • ZSnakeZSnake
    edited 5:15AM
    No Problem man. I'm still thinking about that as well, i kinda gave up on it in the beginning(I uploaded my first beat on youtube) and i might have to reconsider but first i just wanna improve and get better and better and better and better lmao xD
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