I’m not digging most of the children sounds, which I’m assuming are live ambience and not intended to be part of the track, but some of them almost work with the track. Besides that, the bass line is fun, but I’m not feeling the horn sample or the tom that come in midway.
@ronji said:
I’m not digging most of the children sounds, which I’m assuming are live ambience and not intended to be part of the track, but some of them almost work with the track. Besides that, the bass line is fun, but I’m the horn sample or the tom that come in midway.
Correct that's my kids in the background lol. Thanks for listening.
@The_Bro I think you need to focus on music theory and arrangement. Sonically, your songs are getting much better, but your chord progressions and melodies seem a little aimless. I'd recommend going through a bunch of this fellow's videos.
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Anyone feeling this or do you hate it lol?
I’m not digging most of the children sounds, which I’m assuming are live ambience and not intended to be part of the track, but some of them almost work with the track. Besides that, the bass line is fun, but I’m not feeling the horn sample or the tom that come in midway.
Correct that's my kids in the background lol. Thanks for listening.
Anyone else feeling this?
@The_Bro I think you need to focus on music theory and arrangement. Sonically, your songs are getting much better, but your chord progressions and melodies seem a little aimless. I'd recommend going through a bunch of this fellow's videos.
https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCFKJ7NEE5S76QYK696nXDfg
Thanks I'll take a look at those videos when I get a chance.
Similar - ish though this is a classic
Ha ha my tune is pretty different though. Thanks for listening.
Cool fellow Londoner