420 chillin

nweyesk8

http://soundcloud.com/nweyesk8/420-chilin
one of my first full length and finished tracks, Adult ADHD can be a pain. Every day is a new track as I have lost focus on yesterday's <!-- s:P --><img src="{SMILIES_PATH}/icon_razz.gif" alt=":P" title="Razz" /><!-- s:P --> so it feels good to get one fully done. let me know what you think people....

nweyesk8

seriously, let me know what you think. I take other peoples constructive criticism well, I usually get new ideas from it <!-- s:D --><img src="{SMILIES_PATH}/icon_e_biggrin.gif" alt=":D" title="Very Happy" /><!-- s:D --> so let me know...

ProjectDeviation

I listened! It's good. I want the kit. It's a tiny bit on the repetitive side. Take your midis and reiterate them in different voices to create the illusion of variety <!-- s:) --><img src="{SMILIES_PATH}/icon_e_smile.gif" alt=":)" title="Smile" /><!-- s:) -->. The repetitiveness is not as obvious on the drum track but you could definitely use some variance there too. It's a great idea and I'm not trying to knock you down, it's just meant to help. I did like the track, I think even in it's current state, it could make it's way on to a mix of some sort <!-- s:) --><img src="{SMILIES_PATH}/icon_e_smile.gif" alt=":)" title="Smile" /><!-- s:) -->; good job, I hope you polish it even more.

Booch

Pretty solid track man. Diggin the Friday loops <!-- s;) --><img src="{SMILIES_PATH}/icon_e_wink.gif" alt=";)" title="Wink" /><!-- s;) -->

I will agree with ProjectDeviation on the note that it is a little bit repetative, a few change ups here and there or maybe even just one instrement addition could change the entire track. Where it stands now though, definitely chill, and definitely easy on the ears <!-- s:D --><img src="{SMILIES_PATH}/icon_e_biggrin.gif" alt=":D" title="Very Happy" /><!-- s:D -->

nweyesk8

I would be down to share the kit. I thought there was a place here to do that, but I am not finding it right off. Thank you for the input, I will put some work into this track for sure. I could use some input on my other track too, Piano Chimp.