I Had My Cake And Ate it - The Mist (Electronic)

ihadmycakeandateit

Again sorry for the terrible artist name.

This song was made completely with Beatmakers "Pads & Noises" kit. Didn't put much work into it but the end product is stunning in my opinion, haven'y gotten a chance to master this or my other song with ableton yet, but i will when i get some time.
http://soundcloud.com/ihadmycakeandateit/the-mist


Again, compliments and critiscm are encouraged, if you can, rate it out of 10 also!


EDIT: I had an upload error, only 9secs of the song available, working on fixing it right now.

Second Edit: Fixed, yay!!

Booch

I am always one for abstract and offbeat songs, but for some unknown reason I wasn't a huge fan of this particular track. Its not nessisarily that it was done bad, I am actually not sure why it didnt didn't rub me the right way, but it didn't. HOWEVER I did take the liberty of checking out your other song, Rainy Beat, and I loved that. I especially liked how in that song, you reversed some beats and added in some cool noises while maintaining a great beat transition. If I had to rate this song, I would give it a 6/10 because, though I didnt like it, its not bad. It sounded good, and could use some touching up, but thats the nature of this music <!-- s;) --><img src="{SMILIES_PATH}/icon_e_wink.gif" alt=";)" title="Wink" /><!-- s;) -->

Rainy beat I would give about a 8/10, I really liked it, thought it had some cool ideas and beats, and sounded pretty good, but could always use some finishing touches imo. Just constructional criticism.

Oh and by the way, I Had My Cake And Ate It is an AWESOME band/group name. You should keep it. Though I would run them alltogether like ihadmycakeandateit (such as how your user name is). Thats just too awesome <!-- s:D --><img src="{SMILIES_PATH}/icon_e_biggrin.gif" alt=":D" title="Very Happy" /><!-- s:D --> just my .02 cents though. Keep up the good work bro!